Oh I like this, good figurework

thank you very much.

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R.I.P. MICHAEL TURNER 1971 – 2008

Considering what a sketchy mess the original is you did a decent job of translating the linework into ink.

How long does it take you to ink something like this? I'm asking because you may need to slow down a bit or invest in a set of French curves so things like the sword blade will come out smoother and cleaner. Her eyes and nose get a little bit lost in translation, are you using a lightbox to ink on a new sheet? Don't be afraid to play with lineweights to make the forms more believable. Throwing a thicker, meatier line on the bottom of stuff like her forearms can really make a piece pop and add depth where my sketchy lineart lacked it.

Of course these are just some observations on my part. It's obvious you've been at this for some time so maybe some of these points have come up before from others. Take them as you will but I just get a kick out of anyone wanting to take the time to work on something I've drawn especially with ink or color.

Keep up the good work and thanks again!


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I'll figure something out, I always do.

ZOMBIES LOVE COMICS
MY COMICSPACE GALLERIES

I thank you for your kind words and will do so to improve on my inks, thank you again ^^

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R.I.P. MICHAEL TURNER 1971 – 2008

The best gratitude you can show me is to keep getting better and better at what you do.



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I'll figure something out, I always do.

ZOMBIES LOVE COMICS
MY COMICSPACE GALLERIES

no worrys i shall. ^^

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R.I.P. MICHAEL TURNER 1971 – 2008